It rained,
But quite cloudlessly last night...
It was no downpour,
Just a little shower so light,
It only moistened the patchy grass,
Didn't sink to the mud or ire the mite,
But it rained
Quite cloudlessly last night...
The stars were dimmed,
Surely, 'cause the skies didn't look as bright,
The twin skies, ne'er to meet, were soaked,
In mildly warm, but greatly dampened light,
And yet, it was quite cloudlessly...
That it rained last night!
13 comments:
The twin skies??????
keno ????
Awesome! :)
Landed here through some blogs. And glad for that!
@Kirtimalini
Am glad u liked it... how about keeping the visit a regular thing!! :) Thanks!
first i ddn undrstnd and when i undrstnd it , i don undrstnd that what to say that u'ld undrstnd that i have undrstnd it n .....any ways this was butifull convergence of two natural things vastly wide within their nature of act...
Sure :) Nothing beats a good poem. And anything for that! :)
Keep writing, you never know when the best combination of words come to a creative mind! ;)
Like Mr. Humbhi , I didn't get it the first time.
But when I did ... I read it a couple of times more. It's wonderful dude. Loved this one.
Hmmm...this kind of reflects my current state of mind...
Can more than relate to it!!
Well written, must say.
@Devesh, Vidu & Kirti
Thanks a lot for your kind words!! Keep reading!! :)
Appu!!! It was frighteningly personal and beautifully overcast(ed)!!!
P.S.: I don't use so many exclamation mark carelessly. :)
@weeping horse - wow i didnt realise this would elicit such great emotions and comments!! Glad the cloud cover poured out!!
Thanks a ton man!
Lovely..appu..you mix nature and emotions so well..a genuine heart of an poet you have.
It did rain...is all I can say....
Thanks for such a beautiful expression....
It did rain...is all I can say....
Thanks for such a beautiful expression....
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